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以下是我给上海引领翻译的试译稿，由于对方没有回复，故贴出。请大伙指正。

在此次培训班上，XX老师对于“ERP项目实施问题”的讲授，深入浅出，不仅对ERP项目实施、运行管理做了详尽的讲解，获得学员的阵阵掌声；而且在对不同行业做案例分析时，风趣幽默，让学员在笑声中吸取了经验教训。来自不同行业的学员对XX老师的精彩讲授给予了充分的肯定，并且在提问答疑的时间里争先恐后的提出问题，XX老师都作了耐心细致的讲解。 此次培训中，XX老师通过自己在实践中积累的丰富知识和经验，使广大学员全面系统地了解了ERP的整个实施过程和正确的步骤，明确了概念，解除了困惑，促使减少实施中的盲目性，对实际工作有很强的指导意义。

During this particular training course, Dr. (Mr.) xx gave a good instruction on ERP project implementation, presenting the complex theories in a simplified manner. His detailed explanation on ERP project implementation and operations management gained peals of applause from the trainees. In addition to this, his witty humor during the case analyses of different trade industries helped the trainees learn the lessons with fun. The trainees, coming from different trade industries, gave very good feedback on his instruction. During question time, they vied with each other in raising questions, all of which were patiently and thoroughly answered by Dr. (Mr.) xx. In this training course, Dr. (Mr.) xx employed his extensive knowledge and experiences gained in actual practice to make the trainees comprehensively and systematically understand the entire and correct process of implementing ERP. He also helped them to understand the concepts, to clear up their confusion, and to increase their awareness on the implementation process and because of these, his instructions serve as a strong guide in actual work.

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我觉得贴主写的挺好的，不过他们可能不需要很多人。因为对于专业性质不是很强的稿件，英文专业的很多人能做，而实际上，英文专业每年都招很多人。

另外，我觉得中译英的水平，除了太差的和太好的，大家都差不多。没有语法错误，意思不漏。有人说自己中译英比别人做的好，但是反正他写的英文大家都看到过，有的人甚至还有语法错误（我觉得是比较仓促，没有检查的缘故），大家也都了解了。不过这很正常，大家都不是英国人，论坛里面也很少有高级专业翻译，或者是北外外文专业的教授。

不能说是中式英文。我想，中式英文应该指那些有时态、语态、数等语法错误的英文（因为英文中的一些语法概念，中文中没有），而不是写的不够地道，不够好。但是，可能，给“Native Speaker”一看，就知道是外国人写的。

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洋人来译更糟，因为同样，精通汉语的洋人更少，远比精通英语的中国人少得多。如果对源语不甚了了，问题会更加严重。